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PostSubject: Criminals And The Picking Up   Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:29 pm

Ione's heels clanked on the floor as she walked on. The museum had very nice exhibits, and artifacts, she couldn't help but smirk at the irony. This place didn't have very good security in her opinion, and she didn't blame thieves for robbing this place. The murder was probably over the top. Killed by some old Indian weapons from the exhibits. Pretty nasty. What they stole, she hadn't found out yet. Whatever it is.. Must be some worth.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:57 pm

One week in. It was one week ago he and his partner had taken down the massive drug network that had plauged the city. Since then, it was estimated that the amount of drugs was almost half as much had it had been. Everyone knew about it. He had become a bit of a hero. At 22, he was a hero. Even been promoted to detective. He was still contemplating the job offer the FBI had given him. But he didnt want to be a hero. He wanted his partner back. His best friend. Who went back to childhood. Hit with a bullet,sending him into a coma. And sending Jack into a depression. It should have been me.

Jack pulled his work car up to the curb. Rain fell heavily on the windsheild. He pulled his raincoat on, and stepped out of the car. He kept his head down, wanting to pass the many reporters at the scene unnoticed. Once he got up the museam steps, past the police tape, he would be fine. He doubted anyone would bother him at work.

As Jack passed the museam exhibits, he barley stopped to look at them. Instead, he looked around or his new partner. Somone named Ione. An odd name. After following the trail of cops and forensics specialists,he asked about detective Ione. One of the cops, a man by the name of Howard Griffen, pointed her out. Jack approached her, and smiled abit.
"Detective Ione?" he asked.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:09 pm

"Yes?" Ione turned around, the constant cold look wiped from her face. "Detective Jack, it's nice to meet you." She held out her hand for him to shake. The famous Detective Jack. He'd become quite popular in the past week, and she was more than thrilled to work with someone of high intelligence and authority. He had certainly gained her attention. But what she was unsure about, was his friend. Was he steady enough to be working already? Especially a case that involved murder? She wasn't about really to give him her full trust yet, but intented to work sufficiently with him. "Would you like to see the body first, or examine the exhibits?"
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:19 pm

Jack shook her hand. There was somthing he missed about introducing himself. Everyone seemed to know him. She knows your name because she got assigned to your sorry ass, stupid. Jack sighed. He wanted a vacation. He would take one soon. He wanted that little voice to go away ASAP.
"Well, that depends. Do they have a dinosaur exhibit here?" he asked, showing a weak smile that didn't travel into his eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:38 pm

Ione nodded, shrugging off the longing look in his eyes. "I'm sure they do, it's just a matter of finding it." She said looking up at the balcony, and into the exhibits on the second floor. "There." She pointed up to the right. She slowly made her way to the grand staircase. "You like history?" She asked
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:42 am

Jack followed Ione up the staircase. "Nah, I just like dinosaurs." he smiled, shaking his head. "How about you? What do you like?" he asked, as he leaned up against the railing, examining the dinosaur. It amazed him how big things could get, and how tiny they were in the grand scheme of things. They were infinitely small.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 5:01 pm

Ione nodded, appreciating the enormous feel of the creature. It let you know the room was big, but made it look small. "I like..." She looked around. "Geology.. Minerals, gemstones." She shrugged, nodding to a room down the hall, lined with the colorful creations. Sure, they were pretty, but she liked the history part of it. Where they came from, how it got here, how long it'd been forming. They made her feel connected to the rest if the world, and down to earth. Plus, she thought each one represented something. An idea, place, a person.
Furrowing her brow, she looked down over the balcony. "What was taken...?" She muttered to herself. She was suprised. They didn't steal a diamond, nothing from the Egytian exibit, or dinosaur bones. This was as far as she could tell, because nobody was visibly crowded into one of those areas. "So.. They didn't go the pretentious route did they" she muttered again.

(I seriously... Cannot come up with an item stolen.... I'm trying to wrap up a bunch of stories.. But it's not working out. You hav any ideas?)
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 5:10 pm

(well, for an idea we could say the murder in the museum is diversion for somthing bigger to take place?)

Jack nodded. He was about to say somthing, when his phone rang.
"Uh, hold on a sec. I gotta take this." He pulled his phone out of his pocket, and answered.
"Hello...? Oh, Im fine cheif. Um, just getting in now... uh huh... well, we'll check it out when we get there... Alright, bye."
He shrugged.
"That was the cheif. We'd, uh... better head over to the crime scene, ya know?" he asked, motioning over to the stair case. He started off down the stairs, past the ornate artifacts from Ancient Mesopotamia, or somthing. He didnt really care.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 5:32 pm

( yes yes... You good at this stuff..)

Ione listened quietly, nodding, following him down the stairs. Soon enough, they met Chief in front of the Renaissance hall. She wasn't sure what anyone would find useful in the there as she peered around him. "Yes?" She asked, looking at Cheif. Maybe they want torture devices... Or weapons..
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:11 pm

Jack greated the cheif, who grunted at both him and Ione.
"This way..." The chief muttered, ducking under yellow tape, and leading them down a hallway. The first thing Jack recognized was the smell. Death. He hadnt been on the job long enough to be used to it... he didnt think he ever could. The amount of cops increased, along with forensics speacialists.
"Now, I may as well warn you... its not pretty in there." the cheif advised. As they rounded the corner, a ring cops stood near an exhibit. They were all looking up. When they saw the cheif, followed by Jack and Ione, they parted. What Jack saw sickened him. The exhibit was like a jousting area. There were two statues of knights on horses. The horses were reared up on their hind legs, an they each held lances with banners attached. And there was the body... impaled on one of the lances. Blood spattered all over the statue and floor. But a solid puddle was beneath where he hung.
"Jesus..." it was like someone knocked the wind out of Jack.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 8:40 pm

Ione walked through the cops, and coughed. She felt like choking up, but instead pulled the top of her coat over her nose. "That's fucking gruesome..." She said, stepping around the blood. Just because she was a detective, didn't necessarily mean she could handle blood. She didn't mind small amounts of it, but puddles made her feel uneasy. As she stared up at the body, a thought acquired. How did he get up there? Well yes.. The killers put him there.. But they were so set on bringing his body to a high place. They must've known they had time.. Or they just made time. Whoever they were, must have been strong enough to lift a grown man, and somehow hoist him up. They were clearly making a statement.
Ione turned back to Chief. "Who is he?" She asked. "And, how long before they get the body down?" She paused, looking back up. The body doesn't look struggled. He doesn't took to be in pain, or fighting. Could he have been killed, or knocked out another way? "But.. Why would they put him there..." She muttered.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 8:58 pm

Jack looked at the puddle. And then up at the guy. He wore a uniform. He looked like he was one of the night watchmen. He turned to the nearest cop.
"Who found him?"
The cop pointed over to a older guy, wearing the same uniform, and being questioned by a cop.
"Guy said he came into work this morning, but the door wasnt unlocked like it should of been. When he came in, he looked around for anyone on duty... all he saw was this.
"He say anything else?"
"Nope. Hes kinda shaken by the whole situation."
"Rightfully so. Well, thanks for the help." The cop nodded, and walked away. Jack went back to Ione.

"Huh... judging by the size of the puddle, he must have been up there all night. This is a big museam, though. Why was he the only one on watch? It doesnt make sense. And I dont see any blood spatter, except for up there. So, there must have not been a struggle. Its almost like... he put himself up there." Jack finished, coming to a possible hypothesis. But even IF he was right, why? what was his motive? If he was suicidal, all he had to do was take some pills, or...
"What do you think Ione?"
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:30 pm

Ione stared at the body and the statue for a good two minutes, before looking back to him with a grin. "Jack, I think I want to climb up there." She pulled off her coat and shoes, handing them to a nearby cop. "Be a dear, and hold these for me.." She said. He had nothing better to do, might as well make him useful. She shrugged, pulling herself up onto the base of the tail, then proceeded to climb up it's back, past the knight, and up by its mane. She propped her hip against the head, just high enough to look at the body. "I don't think it was a suicide..." She said, looking at him. "Usually.. People who commit suicide cry.. But his eyes show no sign of it." She looked closer at his body. Maybe the workers here were onto something. It could explain why only one worker was here at the time of the incident. He could have very well revolted, and the workers killed him. "If you'd like, you can join be up here." She called down to Jack.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Tue Feb 25, 2014 5:51 pm

Jack grinned up at her, and striped his coat off. He tossed it at the poor cop, already toting Ione's stuff. His confident side had beat down his mature side, and he switched "appropriate work attire", like ties and button up shirts, for more comfortable things, like blue jeans and a orange collared tee shirt.

Jack had always been confident in his athletic abilities. But climbing was not his strong suit. As a kid, his brothers would make fun of him every time there was a rock climbing wall around. He would sit out with his older sister. Even in P.E., when they had to climb ropes, he would go so far as to fake a football or hockey injury, so he could be excused from the ropes. It had to be some deep down fear of heights.

Luckily, the statue wasn't very big. He hauled himself up the horses back, and grabed the knight's arm for leverage. He pushed off from the saddle with his foot, and pulled himself in front of the knight. After another few feet, and was next to Ione.
"Huh... that's weird. You're right about him not crying, but... he almost looks like he's smiling..."
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Tue Feb 25, 2014 6:25 pm

"How ironic.." Ione said humorously. "He must've died happy" She cocked her head, a small grin on her face. It was sad, that her life had come to finding something like this so humorous. At 23, years old, she had come head on to enough depressing shit to last her a lifetime. But she liked it, it kept her going.
Her eyes became wide, and she grabbed Jack's shoulder. "I wonder, maybe he did because he wanted too. Not out of sadness, but for the greater good kind of way. Like a sacrifice.. "She said. "But.. What did he do it for?" She looked around.
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Tue Feb 25, 2014 7:41 pm

Jack looked at Ione, raising an eyebrow. He found her smile... unsettling. But quickly hid his restlessness from her, as to not offend her.
"A sacrifice?" He asked, incredulously. "I'm not sure... I mean, I don't see a way for him to have been able to impale himself like this. The lance is too high to run into. And anyways, it went through his back, and out his front. I don't see anywhere he could've jumped from, and anyhow, you could land on this unless you where flung into it. Maybe...maybe this wasn't a suicide. If it was murder, it would back up your theory as to why no one else was here... I'm confused." He ended lamely.
"Hey! This is a murder scene, you two, not a jungle gym." The chief called out. "I trust the investigation is going well, you two?"
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PostSubject: Re: Criminals And The Picking Up   Tue Feb 25, 2014 8:07 pm

Ione raised an eyebrow. "I don't think he did it by himself. He had others help him." She said. "Who's to say he wasn't killed, then placed here. Him and his killers planned to put him here." She paused. "I just don't understand.. Why here?.. And not in the main hallway or something. What is so significant about a god damn lance?" She looked down at Chief with a smile. "You'd be suprised to know what lengths we'd go to sir." She called. "The world is our playground."
Ione looked back to Jack. "Alright.. I think we should take a break from the body. It's giving me a headache. And there's blood everywhere." She grimaced. "What do you say?"
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