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PostSubject: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 10:12 am

Name: Falen
Nickname: Faly
Alias: non
Age: 15
Appeared Age: 16 or 17
Gender: Female
Orientation: Straight
Occupation: Doesn't have a Job, lived in the school.
Hair color: Blonde with brown underneath.
Hair Style: Falen wears her hair down, she doesn't like to
mess with it. Her hair has thick, loose curls.
Eye Color: Ocean Blue
Height: 5ft 4 inches
Weight: 87 pounds
Build: Skinny, and lean.
Scars: non
Birthmarks: Wings.. haha I made a joke. :3
Tattoos: non.
Piercings: non.
Clothing: She usually wears jeans, jean jackets, hoodies,
and sneakers. She cuts slits in her hoodie so she can spread
her wings at anymoment. For formal wear, which she rarely
wears, she hasskinny jeans, black tall boots, and a poncho
style purple and black shirt.
General Appearance:



By the way, she is 98% human and 2% Avian

Likes:
Flying
Swiming
cooking

Dislikes:
White coats
Erasers
Death
Being emotional
Drama

Hobbies:
Flying of course!
She also likes to draw
She is a good singer

Personality:
She is protective of her flock, she is brave, hot-headed, and holds a grudge.

WINGS:
Her wings are 15 feet across, they are tawny colored with white exterior feathers and black accents.

Items:
• She has a backpack with blankets, clothes, and a few books to keep herself busy along with tooth burshes, tooth paste and other iteams for her needs.(things your character carries, no minimum)


Weapons:
• Swish army knife (weapons your character owns, no minimum)

• crowbar

Abilities:
• She can fly really fast, up to 630 miles per hour (supernatural abilities, like super strength; N/A, if human)

• She can read and send thoughts to people

Weaknesses:
• She isn't good with guns (supernatural weaknesses, like low speed; these MUST balance your abilities; N/A, if human)

• Freaks out around hospitals..


Father: Jeb
Mother: Unknown
Sibling(s): Her sister Kate, and half sister Max and Ella
Pet(s): non
Friend(s): She only knows her sister Kate, and her friend Sam. A human.
Lover(s): She is in love with Sam.

Three Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:
• She is Jebs daughter, she doesn't know it yet.

• She is being hunted by the erasers and flyboys.

• Jeb traded her in for money and became a white coat.


History: When she was three she was kid napped and turned into what she is now. She was rescued by Jeb until she was 6 then he took her to the school. 6 years later she was in surgery, she woke up early and leapt through the window and ran escaping from the school. She is now somewhere is Florida on the run with her flock.

RP Sample: (at least 200 words; not necessary for second and third characters unless given notice)
I woke quickly, adrenaline surging through my veins. They didn't know I was awake, I felt the motion of them wheeling me down the hallway. I give myself a moment to prepare myself and I bolt out and I run towards the window. I almost slipped on the tile floor. I brace myself for the pain of falling through a 12 story window. I flew myself at it and I felt sharp shards of glass graze my skin. A moment of panic surged through me as I felt myself falling. My dirty blonde hair blowing back, my I jerked out my wings and screamed, my wing sprained I plummeted down landing hark on my shoulder. My ears rang as my head smacked against the pavement. I was to scared to move, I thought I might of broke something. I roll over and stare at the window, Scientist were in panic I heard one yell. “What if it broke something!” How nice of them to worry I thought sarcastically. I hated it when they called me IT. I am not an IT. I hear Erasers bark, yep I might want to run. I thought and at a snail's pace I got up and ran ignoring the rocks scraping my bare feet, ignoring the pain in my head and the constant ringing in my ears. I ran into the forest, twigs and branches tearing up my hospital gown, sharp dry grass poking and tickling my feet. I looked back, Erasers running at me. I tripped over a log and tumbled down the slope, I got up, I screamed with pain. A dart in my arm. I pulled it out and kept running. I tried to fly, nothing. My wing was too injured. I took deep breaths tired my vision fuzzy. I was almost in tears Erasers at my heels. I ran up a slope, slipping on loose granite rocks cutting my my skin. I got to the top and ran again, I looked behind me. My own brother, Ari, who was 7 was now an Eraser trying to kill me. He was right at my heels, his teeth bared drooling like I was prey… Which I am. I leapt over a log and I feel down on my ankle. I yelled out, my ankle twisted. I got up in an instance and ignored the throbbing emanating from my ankle. I won’t go to school today, I will never go back. I will never get caught. I thought giving myself a small pep-talk. I’m not going to die today.


How Did You Find Us?: I play Ovi Pets and I joined one of their ovi groups and learned they had roleplays, so since I love Maximum Ride I thought it would be cool to RP it and I looked it up.

What Do We Call You?: You can call me Rebecca, Becca, or Lynn.

How Long Have You Been RPing?: For about four months, but I'm a writer so I have a little experiance.

Where you invited, if so by who?: I found it myself!



And Im done! Very Happy
Please tell me what you think! P.S I LOVE MAXIMUM RIDE Laughing


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PostSubject: Re: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 10:13 am

the bold things didn't work, oh well!
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PostSubject: Re: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:48 am

Did I post my character on the wrong one?
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PostSubject: Re: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:54 am

Hello! Very Happy Welcome to our flock!

Orientation is her sexuality. (Straight, homosexual, Bisexual, etc)

It looks good! Except you are missing the bottom half of the sheet! So just fill in this part and add it to your sheet and then i'll check it over again! Very Happy THanks!~

Items:

  • (things your character carries, no minimum)

Weapons:

  • (weapons your character owns, no minimum)

Abilities:

  • (supernatural abilities, like super strength; N/A, if human)

Weaknesses:

  • (supernatural weaknesses, like low speed; these MUST balance your abilities; N/A, if human)


Father:
Mother:
Sibling(s):
Pet(s):
Friend(s):
Lover(s):

Three Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:





History:

RP Sample: (at least 200 words; not necessary for second and third characters unless given notice)

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How Did You Find Us?:

What Do We Call You?:

How Long Have You Been RPing?:

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PostSubject: Re: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:59 am

Oh okay! Thank you for the advice, let me fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:42 pm

How's that? Question
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PostSubject: Re: My Character Falen (I'm knew BTW!)   Tue Apr 02, 2013 8:10 pm

(try not to double post Wink )
It looks excellent ^_^ im glad to see so many new members!!!

Accepted ^_^ welcome to the site Very Happy

id like to also mention we RP by 3rd person point of veiw Razz if you need any help though jsut send me a message ill give yah a hand Smile


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