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PostSubject: Jake Raven   Thu Mar 28, 2013 11:49 pm

Name: Jake Raven
Nickname(s): Icarus
Age: 17
Appeared Age: N/A
Gender: Male
Orientation: Heterosexual
Occupation: Unemployed

Race: Avian Human Hybrid

Hair Color: Dirty blonde
Hair Style: Short and messy
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 115
Build: Very skinny and lean.
Scar(s): A few lines up his right arm.
Birthmark(s): N/A
Tattoo(s): N/A
Piercing(s): N/A
Clothing: Jake can normally be seen wearing dark skinny jeans with a white belt, a graphic t-shirt, flat bottom sneakers, and aviator sunglasses. If the weather is colder he'll wear a hoodie. If it's warmer, he'll trade in his jeans for broad shorts.
General Appearance: Jake, on the surface, appears to be a typical short, skinny, teenager. He has a good completion with very little acme. Don't let the messy hair fool you, he is always very aware of his looks. He is white with a slight tan.


  • Playing guitar
  • Skateboarding
  • Snowboarding
  • Surfing
  • Partying
    Post-Capture (In addition to the above)
  • Surviving
  • Freedom
  • Comfort


  • Close relationships
  • Boredom
  • Being Watched


  • Being restrained, either emotionally or physically
  • Erasers


  • Playing guitar
  • Parkour
  • Good speaker and leader


  • Uncaring
  • Selfish
  • Superficial

General Personality: Jake lies to get what he wants. Some money, a girl, all he has to do is use that silver tongue if his. He is always looking out for himself, everyone else comes second. He will only help someone if it is in his best interest. He's very efficient in that way. Either you are useful or not. Perhaps this is why his relationships have been limited to one night stands and he bearly spoke to most of his family before his capture. He is not the trusting kind.


  • Small backpack
  • Sunglasses
  • Black Bandana


  • Handgun


  • Telekinesis (Hands must be free, object must be within 100 yards, object can't be over 300 pounds)
  • Homeostasis (Dead cells are replaced at the same rate they are lost. Because of this, Jake does not age.)


  • Use of Telekinesis causes extreme mental and physical fatigue. unconsciousness can set in after only minutes of continues use.
  • Because Jake's body is always replenishing its lost cells Jake must consume an above average amount of water and food (even for a bird kid).

Father: Paul Raven - Deceased
Mother: Grace Raven - Deceased
Sibling(s): Blake Raven(Brother) - Missing, Jessy Raven (Sister) - Missing
Pet(s): Atlas (Husky) - Deceased
Friend(s): N/A
Lover(s): N/A

Three Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:

  • Recently escaped
  • Untrustworthy
  • Skilled Guitar player

History: Jake was born in Los Angeles to a middle class family. They had a house near the beach and Jake lead an average life. He enjoyed sports such as skateboarding, surfing and snowboarding. He attended public elementary school then middle school. It wasn't until high school and his teenage years that his family became aware of his deceitful and cold nature. Naturally this kind of behavior does not build good relationships and he began to grow apart from his family and some of his friends. Now this was completely fine with Jake. The only thing Jake relied on his parents for was housing (sometimes not even that), everything else he could get himself. He was a kid who knew what he wanted and would get. He wanted to have fun? He would go to a beach party. He wanted an A on the upcoming test? He would either cheat or study. It didn't matter which. He wanted to go surfing? You're damn right he would go surfing. This was the extent of Jake's life until one day, the day of the accident. Jake was on his skateboard zipping along a deserted street when out of no where he was struck by a truck. Jake sailed through the air and landed hard on the unforgiving pavement. He passed in an out of consciousness for an undetermined amount of time. He awoke first in the cabin of a vehicle, then an operation room, finally a cage. More surgeries followed. The days were full of agonizing pain. The scars burned as they healed. The medicine felt like cold water in his veins. In the end he was completely transformed. Faster, stronger, lighter and two soft, black wings projecting from the sensitive flesh of his back. Jake's mind during his first few months in the School was cloudy at best. To the point where sometimes, he could not remember his own name. At these times he would refer to himself as 'Icarus' after remembering a mythology book he read (he still enjoys using the name). After his health and mind returned the tests began. This was the worse for Jake. The combined loss of freedom and helplessness was almost too much to bear. But he held on. Then, one day, Jake and several other experiments had to transported to another facility. During the truck ride there was an accident and the truck crashed. Jake seized his opportunity in the resulting chaos and escaped. How ironic that a truck brought him to the school and a truck brought him out of it. Either way he has been on the run ever since.

RP Sample: 'Oh Iron Man, you never fail to impress.' Jake thought staring up at the massive screen. He was in one of the the many multiplexes that covered Los Angeles. Jake liked using movie theaters to hide from erasers for many reasons. The theaters were relatively easy to sneak into and stay in all day. The number of entrances were small and the darkness allowed for easy hiding. If he used the earplugs he stole weeks ago he could even sleep. This particular movie Jake had seen about 3 times already so he wasn't very engaged. He slowly drifted in and out of sleep. A loud explosion during the climax of the movie finally jointed him awake. Rubbing his eyes he glanced around the theater. Slumping in his seat he suddenly sat straight up and slowly scanned the dark room a second time. There was no one to be seen. Jake specifically remembered at least 15 people were in here at start of the movie. Glancing left and right Jake felt the cold hand of dread grip his chest. On either side of him sat two males. Jake could tell by the muscular build and the fact they were staring right at him, they were erasers. Not missing a beat Jake grabbed the seat in front of himself and vaulted over it. He ran down the sloped theater seating running on top of the upholstered chairs. Already he could hear the erasers starting to transform, their howls filling the room. Muttering curses to himself he aimed for the emergency exit door at the front if the room, next to the screen. Upon running out of chairs to run atop Jake throws himself the last few feet at the door and smashes through it into the light. Jake spins around and pulls out the handgun he had tucked in the waist of his jeans. He fires off three shots in rapid secession into the darkness before turning and sprinting down the alleyway he now finds himself. A howl of pain tells him one of his shots found their mark. He flexes his back and feels his wings shot out to either side of himself. They push down and Jake feels the updraft lift him up painfully slow. Gritting his teeth he flicks his free hand and a trash can shots right in front of him. Using it as a spring board he pushes off it with his foot and shots into the air. Beneath him, he can see the erasers running and jumping now fully transformed. They snap their teeth in vain at the sky. Jake laughs with relief and banks to the right flying over some buildings. There is no better feeling then the rush after just escaping an ambush.


How Did You Find Us?: I googled Maximum Ride RP

What Do We Call You?: Nero

How Long Have You Been RPing?: Three years. I made my start on a couple forums dedicated to roleplay. From there I started roleplaying in Minecraft. I recently took a break from roleplaying but now I'm back.

Where you invited, if so by who?: N/A
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PostSubject: Re: Jake Raven   Fri Mar 29, 2013 9:49 am

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There's one sad truth in life I've found
While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
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