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PostSubject: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 7:44 pm

First update: 4/24/13

Name: Jack Ryan
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Orientation: Straight

Race: Avain-Hybrid
Hair Color: Brownish blondish
Hair Style: Messy
Eye Color: Clear deep blue
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 125 lbs. (Light because of hollow bones)
Build: Fit, Athletic build, but on the thin side
Clothing: Dark blue jeans, Red and blue plaid button up shirt, with sleeves rolled up, and shirt not tucked in. Stolen basketball sneakers.
General Apperance: Average high, with a look resembling a normal highschooler. Good build, with night black wings, expanding 16 ft. Clear blue eyes. Never really tries to be normal, and likes to be his own person.

Personality: Funny, goofy person. Ussally kind, but can dfinatly bust a few skulls. Can make friend easily, and usually can trust people, even with his background.

Likes:
Girls
Snow
Flying
Food
Hockey
Snowboarding
Running

Dislikes:
Guns
Bad people
Fat people
Doctors
Any medical supplies



Fears:
Doctors
Spiders
jumpscares


Talents:
Good fighter
Rather good runner


Flaws:
Gets bored easily
Too Damon good looking


Abilities:
Can see time move at a slower rate, making him react faster.
Can read minds/feel people's presence.
Can light self on fire at will, and is Fire resistant.

Weaknesses:
Can only see time at a slower rate if he is focused.
Sometimes has paralysis attacks, attacks in which his whole body locks down.
Jacks body may not always be able to light on fire at will.


Two Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:
Doesn't know if he's genetically made, or not.
Had intensive, and painful retinal experimens done on him...

History: Unknown





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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 7:45 pm

Can u put it back now???
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:11 pm

Personality is no longer optional
Appearance needs to be four lines with clothing lines counting.
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:19 pm

Your appearance is like, not even two lines.

I almost forgot, history isn't optional either.
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:20 pm

Your friggin killing me Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:36 pm

Now you're at two and a half lines for appearance.

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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 8:42 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Jack Ryan (Update)   Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:58 pm

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