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PostSubject: Is THIS where I put my Charecter?   Fri Aug 10, 2012 3:16 pm

I couldn't find where to post my charecter Neutral So here it is

Name: Jack Ryan 
Nickname(s): 
Alias:
Age: 17
Appeared Age: 18 (N/A if human)
Gender: Male
Orientation: Straight
Occupation:

Race: Avain Hybrid (if not listed, provide a paragraph description)

Hair Color: Dirty Blonde
Hair Style: Messy, unkept hair.
Eye Color: Clear
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 125 (light because of hollow bones)
Build: Athletic
Scar(s): A small scar right down the right corner of his mouth, about an inch or so long.
Birthmark(s): None
Tattoo(s):
Piercing(s): None (If I were stuck by that many needles, and sharp things at the school, I wouldn't have any piercingly either.
Clothing: Running sneakers, black socks. Shorts (That go a little past his knees), and a black AC DC tee.  Sometimes a baseball hat for the New York Yankees.
General Appearance:  Not exactly ripped, with muscles bulging. But he has a lot of excersize, which results in a 6-pack, and a fairly athletic body. Looks like any athletic 17 year old that would run excersize often. He has Night black wings with a 16 ft span. He wears Running sneakers, black socks. And Shorts (That go a little past his knees), and a black AC DC tee.  Sometimes a baseball hat for the New York Yankees. 

Likes:

  • Flying
  • Being able to rest
  • Meeting other Hybrids
  • Baseball
  • Girls

Dislikes:

  • The school
  • Erasers
  • Needles
  • Scientists
  • Labcoats
  • The Hospital/Doctors office
  • Guns

Fears:

  • Being caught by erasers, and brought back to the school
  • Strangers: Anyone could be your enemy

Talents:

  • Drawing
  • Building
  • Ironically, great healer (Almost like a doctor.) 
  • Great at making people laugh
  • Good at flirting

Flaws:

  • Sort of goofy
  • Has ADD and ADHD
  • Needs to eat a lot, due to the amount of calories he burns from his hybrid

General Personality: Jack is an athletic guy, who, despite his past, I'd a very kind guy, though he can be shy at first. He's goofy, funny, and a great charmer. Ironically, he is great at healing. So people are scared by his eyes, so he very rarely goes in public, for it causes a quite large commotion.

Items:

  • Backpack
  • Medical supplies.

Weapons:[list]
[*] Pocket knife
[*] Scalpel
Abilities:

  • Amazing eyesight (Can see in the dark, fog, etc...
  • Can turn into a large black wolf, with wings.
  • Can connect minds with anything living. ex. Share thought, sights, feelings, etc...

Weaknesses:

  • Can also feel pain, even die depending on what happens to the thing he's connected to.
  • Sometimes he passes out, due to the large amount of energy that is exerted from connecting to other things, or morphing.
  • When he morphs into a wolf, sometimes he can't go back to human for a bit, or vise versa.
  • Sometimes blacks out, and has visions of the terrible experiments that were made on him.


Father: 
Mother: 
Sibling(s): His brother Alex. 
Pet(s): 
Friend(s): 
Lover(s): 

Three Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:

  • Had terrible, painful experiments done on him, more painful than any other subject.
  • Jack had a brother, but never knew him. Jack never even knew he had a brother.
  • Was made in the school, had no parents.


History: Was made in the school, and tested on. When they conducted the experiment that was thought to have killed him, he morphed into a wolf, and killed the scientists. After which, he peeled back some iron bars blocking a window, he flew out, escaping. Though of as a high value experiment, he has been hunted down ever since. That was when he was 6. Living alone for more than a decade, he has developed helpful powers, and survive alone... 

RP Sample: A bright light shone from somewhere, blinding him. A mask covered his mouth, but he was awake. And would stay that way. His deep blue eyes reflected off the shiny ceiling. His eyes. It was the only thing he saw. His small body, strapped to the table shuddered, as a Labcoat came into view. He looked at something, and started speaking. "Zis experiment, on subject 211, is belived to enhance its eyesight past that of an owl, even ze hawk. Ve vill replace its rod and cones vith zese enhanced vones. Begining procedure." The scientist then looked to the 5 year old, with no sympathy in his steel eyes. He then, grabbed a sharp, thin knife of the table. Another scientist did likewise, and approached him. Jack struggled, trying to break free. Then, the scientists plunged the knifes straight into his eye balls. Jack screamed in pure pain, and blood ran down the sides of his face. Then, everything went away.

Except the pain.

Later, Jack awoke. He didnt recognize anything. It was to dark. There was no light. But...something distaste to glow. It all started to turn to a weird haze. He started to make out the outline of cages, but it didn't stop there. Lines started to etch themselves into his vision. But it didn't start there. The big, vague details started to become more vivid. Everything was more real. He now saw every little detail, as clear as day. It was all clear now. The experiment.

It worked.

It all seemed amazing. He could see in the dark! He would always be able to see. In his mind, he was invincible. The kid stood up, and for the first time in his lie, he smiled a bit. He felt great. His eyes felt refreshed. He looked down, at the shiny floor, and frowned. He wasn't in a cage. There were just cages around him. And he saw his reflection. He hadn't seen it it so long. His tiny cloths were ragged, and his hair messy. But his eyes. They looked normal, except...they were no longer blue. They were the faintest shade of grey, almost transparent. It looked cool at first, but even Jack knew then that it wasn't normal. And he wasn't in a cage because it was all a test. Everything was just a test.

So what did anything matter?


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How Did You Find Us?: I like rping, so I googled 'Max Ride Rp' 

What Do We Call You?: You can just call me Jack 

How Long Have You Been RPing?: 3 years? Maybe 3 1/2?

Where you invited, if so by who?:


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PostSubject: Re: Is THIS where I put my Charecter?   Fri Aug 10, 2012 3:27 pm

Yes this is were you put the form, but sadly, I'm not an admin, so I can't approve this.
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PostSubject: Re: Is THIS where I put my Charecter?   Fri Aug 10, 2012 3:28 pm

Oh, well thanks! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Is THIS where I put my Charecter?   Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:59 pm

4 powers is a bit much, cut it down to 3, and its perfect Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Is THIS where I put my Charecter?   Fri Aug 10, 2012 8:33 pm

Okay, did it. So after you approve this, an I just start an rp in the events rp section?
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PostSubject: Re: Is THIS where I put my Charecter?   Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:40 pm

Approved Smile

feel free Smile as long as it isnt stupid its fine Razz

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While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
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To those who love us best.
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PostSubject: Jack (BIG UPDATE! RAWR)   Wed Nov 14, 2012 7:41 pm

Name: Jack Ryan
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Orientation: Circular?

Race: Avain-Hybrid

Hair Color: Dirty Blonde
Hair Style: Shaggy
Eye Color: Clear
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 125 lbs. (Light because of hollow bones)
Build: Fit, has abs. Athletic build, but rather thin.
Scar(s): 4 in long, in the small of his back. Got it by falling when he was younger on a wrought iron fence pike.
Clothing: Blue jeans, grey tee-shirt (Sometimes with grey hoodie over it). White running sneakers.
General Apperance: Average high, with a look resembling a highschool lacross player. Good build, with night black wings, expanding 16 ft. Clear, un-readable eyes.

Likes:

  • Girls
  • Snow
  • Flying

Dislikes:

  • Ugly people
  • Bad people
  • Fat people
  • Doctors
  • Any medical supplies

Fears:

  • Doctors
  • Lions

Talents:

  • Drawing
  • Rather good runner

Flaws:

  • Has ADHD
  • Has Dyslexia


Abilities:

  • Can Change age
  • Has Super enhanced eyesight, due to retinal experiments.
  • Can communicate with animals and people, through their minds.

Weaknesses:

  • Is highly suceptoble to poison.
  • Sometimes csnnot control his age changing. Sometimes cannot change age again for a while after he already has (cooldown period).
  • Sometimes passes out and has weird dreams/visions.




Two Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:

  • Doesn't know if he's genetically made, or not.
  • Had intensive, and painful retinal experimens done on him...


History:

P.S. Can You (whoever reads this) Copy the code and My info and PM it to me? My copy and paste is broken... X3

If someone can accept this as soon as possible, that would be cool.
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