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PostSubject: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:27 pm

Name:Drew Light
Age:14
Apperance:Grey eyes, black hair down to the bottom of his ears, strong, skinny.
Outfit:Tattered blue jeans, black tee-shirt, black sneakers.
Wings:Pitch Black, 14ft wingspan.
Bio:Quiet, tough, likes company, good flyer.
History:Lived alone all his life, escaped from the school at age 7.


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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 5:57 pm

this is the character template:
Code:
[b]Name:[/b] (full name, if human)
[b]Nickname(s):[/b]
[b]Alias:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Appeared Age:[/b] (N/A if human)
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Orientation:[/b]
[b]Occupation:[/b]

[b]Race:[/b] (if not listed, provide a paragraph description)

[b]Hair Color:[/b]
[b]Hair Style:[/b]
[b]Eye Color:[/b]
[b]Height:[/b]
[b]Weight:[/b]
[b]Build:[/b] (skinny/lean, muscular, fit, plump, etc)
[b]Scar(s):[/b]
[b]Birthmark(s):[/b]
[b]Tattoo(s):[/b]
[b]Piercing(s):[/b]
[b]Clothing:[/b]
[b]General Appearance:[/b] (in complete sentences, optional)

[b]Likes:[/b][list]
[*] (at least three)
[*]
[*] [/list]
[b]Dislikes:[/b][list]
[*] (at least three)
[*]
[*] [/list]
[b]Fears:[/b][list]
[*] (at least two)
[*] [/list]
[b]Talents:[/b][list]
[*] (at least three, personal talents, like drawing)
[*]
[*] [/list]
[b]Flaws:[/b][list]
[*] (at least three, personal flaws, like biting fingernails)
[*]
[*] [/list]
[b]General Personality:[/b] (in complete sentences, optional)

[b]Items:[/b][list]
[*] (things your character carries, no minimum)
[*] [/list]
[b]Weapons:[/b][list]
[*] (weapons your character owns, no minimum)
[*] [/list]
[b]Abilities:[/b][list]
[*] (supernatural abilities, like super strength; N/A, if human)
[*] [/list]
[b]Weaknesses:[/b][list]
[*] (supernatural weaknesses, like low speed; these MUST balance your abilities; N/A, if human)
[*] [/list]

[b]Father:[/b]
[b]Mother:[/b]
[b]Sibling(s):[/b]
[b]Pet(s):[/b]
[b]Friend(s):[/b]
[b]Lover(s):[/b]

[b]Three Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:[/b][list]
[*]
[*]
[*] [/list]

[b]History:[/b]

[b]RP Sample:[/b] (at least 200 words; not necessary for second and third characters unless given notice)

[center]____________________________________[/center]

[b]How Did You Find Us?:[/b]

[b]What Do We Call You?:[/b]

[b]How Long Have You Been RPing?:[/b]

[b]Where you invited, if so by who?:[/b]


This is a good idea of what it shoudl end up looking like: example

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There's one sad truth in life I've found
While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:43 pm

CODE:
Name:Drew Light (full name, if human)
Nickname(s):Drew
Alias:
Age:15
Appeared Age:17 (N/A if human)
Gender:Male
Orientation:hetro sexual
Occupation:None

Race:Avain hybrid (if not listed, provide a paragraph description)

Hair Color:Black
Hair Style:Emo style
Eye Color:Grey
Height:6ft
Weight:170lbs
Build:Skinny and strong (skinny/lean, muscular, fit, plump, etc)
Scar(s):Scars on back
Birthmark(s):None
Tattoo(s):None
Piercing(s):None
Clothing:Black sneakers, blue jeans, and black tee-shirt.
General Appearance:Black wings, 14ft span, black emo stlye hair, jeans, a black tee-shirt, and black sneekers. Stormy grey eyes. 6ft tall and 170 lbs. (in complete sentences, optional)

Likes:

  • Girls
  • The color black
  • Companions

Dislikes:

  • Erasers
  • Adults
  • Anything steril, and that is like doctors office/stuff

Fears:

  • Doctors, needles, medicine, gauss, etc...
  • Big cats ex.lions, cheetas, etc...

Talents:

  • Building
  • wiring
  • Running

Flaws:

  • Weird dreams...
  • Long-term memory loss
  • ADHD

General Personality:Calm, quiet, strong, tough, likes girls

Items:

  • Swiss army knife
  • Hatchet
  • Backpack
  • Water bottle

Weapons:

  • Hatchet
  • Swiss army knife

Abilities:

  • Can transform into a large black winged wolf
  • Can talk to animals

Weaknesses:

  • Can pass out randomly
  • Can be tracked by anything with animal in it ex.Erasers, hybrids, etc...


Father:Dead
Mother:Dead
Sibling(s):Hasn't seen them. Ever
Pet(s):Black winged wolf cub
Friend(s):Dawn
Lover(s):Any girl...

Three Important Things About Your Character and/or Its Past:

  • Escape from school at age 7, lived alone ever since
  • Only black winged wolf cub for compainion, but longs for human friend
  • Trusts no adult


History:Escaped from the school, and on the run. Drew grew up, never really knowing much about his life. Except one thing. He knew he wasn't right. He wasnt normal. These people twisted around his life. He met his freind and compainion Dawn, and wolf when escaping from the school. Want to help the war effort, and is going to try and make a difference.

RP Sample:
Drew wasnt stupid. He knew what to do, so when the moment came, he took advantage of it. The eraser came into his cage, coming to take him out. The door at the end of the hallway cracked open, and he shot through the cage, and kicked the door off its hinges. He flew through, past whitecoats. He nailed one right in the jaw as he sailed past them. He shot out, trough the hallway and into the gym, where he soared up to the glass window, and smashed through. The cool rain poinded at him as he flew away. Then, the shock collar blasted him with electricity, and it all went white.
(at least 200 words; not necessary for second and third characters unless given notice)

____________________________________

How Did You Find Us?:I love Max ride books, and rping, so i googled MAX RIDE RPING and got this...

What Do We Call You?:Jbone

How Long Have You Been RPing?:A couple of years

Where you invited, if so by who?:Not invited


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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:55 pm

ok, you need to add to appearance,
orientaion means whether the person is: heterosexual, bisexual or homosexual
Caucasian isnt a race, this is the RACES

Just fix those, throw in an RP sample and your good

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There's one sad truth in life I've found
While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:56 pm

Rp example? Whats that?
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:59 pm

.... its a sample of roleplay text to show the admins if a member will have to be pushed or not.

its under the character template. basically a large post.

EXAMPLE:

RP Sample: Isis flew low over the middle of the river, skimming the water with the tips of her wings. She enjoyed the feeling of freedom that flying gave her. Isis flapped her wings and flew up towards the stars. She had stayed here in the forest for a about a day now. Isis felt safe from the whitecoats and Erasers as the thickness of the forest made it hard for anyone to walk through. She flew over to a sturdy-looking tree and started to make a sleeping-basket out of wild vines and branches. Isis lined the basket with ferns and loose leaves. She then played a tune on her panpipes before going to sleep.

this is a fairly small one, but is sufficient.

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There's one sad truth in life I've found
While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:25 pm

I fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:59 pm

a little more on general appearance and your done.

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While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:26 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Tue Nov 29, 2011 10:01 am

accepted

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While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Fri Dec 02, 2011 5:21 pm

You history is tiny, almost not there.

Also your rp sample is 113 words, not the required 200. However, beef up the history and I'll forgive this.


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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Fri Dec 02, 2011 9:49 pm

I fixed it now can u unlock my topic?
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:30 pm

There. I fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Drew light (Update 1)   Sat Dec 03, 2011 3:52 pm

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