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PostSubject: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:41 am

Full Name:Tyler Dark
Hair color: Brown with blond highlights
Date of Birth:7/10/1997
age:13
skin tone:slightyly tan
wing color:mostly brown with white and caramel colored spots
Eye color:dark brown,almost black
Physical Description:His hair is usually in a wave. He's 6'3 and weights 100 pounds. He has a black jacket and a black shirt with white strips at the shoulders to the end of the sleve.
Powers:mind reader,has perfect internal clock
Skills: has a great sence of danger.
Weapon's:small black dagger.
Extra Info:is pariniod Background:Made in a secert lab in Nevada. Since he was a infant a women he called lady took care of him. .He was betraied by one of his friends when he escaped.
Since then he thinks every one is a easer or traitor, you can imangen how that could make someone paranoid. His friend tried to turn him in. He was always being chased by easers and other things.when he grows up(if he does) he wants to be a acrhitec. This passion was created when he visited a architecture expo once. But it ended in flames sadly. He has a sister that is nor but both of them have no idea the other one exist. Except for his sister, she knows she has a dead baby brother. He also Has a likeing for chocolete milk.

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:53 pm

a good start, but please add more. try for beefing up the background, the exceptions fo the mind reading, and what "Telling the exact time." is.

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 1:40 pm

Telling the exact time, you say? I would say that if a person asked him what time it is, he would shout out, "6:15!" and would be correct. Then a minute later, he'll shout "6:16!", and so on and so on and so on~ He's also sickly thin but tall~ Not to be confused for Nevada, he's born in Navada. While trying to escape, his friend ditches him and betrays him somehow. Both of him and his friend are high tailing it and the hallway splits. Tyler chooses left, his friend chooses right, and Tyler stops to turn around and shout, "Yoooouuuu tttrrrraaaaiiiitttoooorrr~"
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 3:40 pm

lol its kinda funny that your reply is actually big enough it would fill the gap XD

... umm.... just curious.... but 6'3" is kinda tall for a kid who weighs 80 lbs.... my 8 year old sister is thin and weighs that much... feel free to keep it, im not saying to change it, but im a little curious on that.

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:21 pm

*shakes head* Nyx... He's got hollow bones cause he's a bird kid! Plus they are tall and look older but they don't weigh much.
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:29 pm

yah but with such long wings and enough muscle for it, it would work with a regular weight. Human bones would break easily if hallowed. Yet a birds weight compared to ratio of wings is perfect. 80lbs of bone and muscle aint much. you'd have to be quick. and for the wings to work if they can only take up 80lbs the kid could eat much.
thats why im asking. like i just have Zero large wings and stronger back muscles.

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:34 pm

Well mister logical in the book series they only weighed inbetween 80-100 pounds and some of them were as old as 14, and eventually 16 in later books.
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:26 pm

your logic is nothing!

But yeah add a bit more and we should be sweat.
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:30 pm

the books are also fictional and do not run on the real principles a company liek Itex would. Like for example it wouldnt not allow Lucifer to run anything. nor would it treat them liek anything but animals.
they wouldn't use wolf DNA also... they would go for a less agressive animal...

and the birdkids werent made for killing, where as if they had been, the company would give them more weight and muscle.

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:55 pm

Gahhh the site is somewhat based off the books! So just stop talking your making my head hurt!!
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Tue Mar 22, 2011 9:51 pm

... heheh

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:40 pm

Sorry about the late edit. Im reallllllllly sorry. l
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Thu Apr 07, 2011 12:37 am

you still need more history mate
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Thu Apr 07, 2011 6:58 pm

That sould do it. Or is there still too little history?
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Thu Apr 07, 2011 7:31 pm

add like 3 more lines and u should be good to go.
(unless dogtooth is ok now, but might as well have extra Razz )

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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:03 pm

Okay that should do it. He's alot like me, especially the achitectute.
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PostSubject: Re: Tyler Dark   Fri Apr 08, 2011 5:01 pm

by golly, that would make you.

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